Grammar mistakes in the manual.

Bug #1482084 reported by xuyang
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Affects Status Importance Assigned to Milestone
openstack-manuals
Fix Released
Low
Olena Logvinova

Bug Description

Hi! I'm spell checking the openstack-manuals(openstack-install-guide-yum-kilo).
In the 6th chapter, Page 68 Networking concepts part. the manual miss a 'space' in the article between 'port.' and 'You'

Detail is as followed

"
...
Additionally, you can allocate IP addresses on external networks to ports on the internal
network. Whenever something is connected to a subnet, that connection is called a
port.You can associate external network IP addresses with ports to VMs. This way, entities
on the outside network can access VMs.
...
"

xuyang (xuyang)
Changed in openstack-manuals:
assignee: nobody → xuyang (xuyang)
Changed in openstack-manuals:
status: New → Confirmed
importance: Undecided → Low
tags: added: install-guide low-hanging-fruit
xuyang (xuyang)
description: updated
Revision history for this message
OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack) wrote : Fix proposed to openstack-manuals (master)

Fix proposed to branch: master
Review: https://review.openstack.org/210206

Changed in openstack-manuals:
status: Confirmed → In Progress
Changed in openstack-manuals:
assignee: xuyang (xuyang) → ologvinova (ologvinova)
Revision history for this message
OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack) wrote : Fix merged to openstack-manuals (master)

Reviewed: https://review.openstack.org/210206
Committed: https://git.openstack.org/cgit/openstack/openstack-manuals/commit/?id=f93615ca4e251d88f358ceb99e35249b9c83eb60
Submitter: Jenkins
Branch: master

commit f93615ca4e251d88f358ceb99e35249b9c83eb60
Author: xu yang <email address hidden>
Date: Fri Aug 7 05:44:31 2015 +0000

    Rectify grammar mistake in install-guide where missing a space

    In the 6th chapter, Page 68 Networking concepts part.
    The manual miss a 'space' in the article between 'port.' and 'You'
    Change the context as followes

    ...
    that connection is called a port. You can associate
    ...

    Upate all XML and RST files.

    Closes-Bug: #1482084
    Change-Id: I3f265ac770d432442f1ecdcb54f0275359ab3c7b

Changed in openstack-manuals:
status: In Progress → Fix Released
Revision history for this message
OpenStack Infra (hudson-openstack) wrote : Fix included in openstack/openstack-manuals 15.0.0

This issue was fixed in the openstack/openstack-manuals 15.0.0 release.

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