Spelling and Grammar Errors in Control file

Bug #825448 reported by Paul Stewart
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gcompris (Ubuntu)
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Bug Description

Steps:

1. Open Ubuntu Software Center
2. Search for gcompris
3. Click the 'More Info' button

There are some spelling and grammar mistakes in the description text.
Second paragraph states "Language-oriented games now contain vocabulary for too many languages to list them heres. "
I suggest that it is changed to "Language-oriented games contain vocabulary for many different languages."

In the list of available boards in the next paragraph there is the line " . learning simple arithmetics"
This should read ". learning simple arithmetic"

The last line also has ". etc."
My opinion only, but I don't think we need that.

ProblemType: Bug
DistroRelease: Ubuntu 11.04
Package: gcompris 9.3-1ubuntu2
ProcVersionSignature: Ubuntu 2.6.38-10.46-generic 2.6.38.7
Uname: Linux 2.6.38-10-generic x86_64
Architecture: amd64
Date: Fri Aug 12 12:33:29 2011
InstallationMedia: Ubuntu 11.04 "Natty Narwhal" - Release amd64 (20110427.1)
ProcEnviron:
 LANGUAGE=en_US:en
 LANG=en_US.UTF-8
 SHELL=/bin/bash
SourcePackage: gcompris
UpgradeStatus: No upgrade log present (probably fresh install)

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Paul Stewart (paulbrianstewart) wrote :
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Paul Stewart (paulbrianstewart) wrote :

I will try to write a patch with my suggested changes.
Thanks
Paul Stewart

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Paul Stewart (paulbrianstewart) wrote :

This is the control file I have pushed up to launchpad for proposal to merge review.

tags: added: patch
Daniel T Chen (crimsun)
Changed in gcompris (Ubuntu):
status: New → In Progress
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Launchpad Janitor (janitor) wrote :

This bug was fixed in the package gcompris - 9.3-1.1ubuntu1

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gcompris (9.3-1.1ubuntu1) oneiric; urgency=low

  * Merge from Debian unstable. Remaining changes:
    - Rebuild with Python 2.7
    - Fix grammatical errors in Descriptions (debian/control).
      Thanks, Paul Stewart! (LP: #825448)
    - Backport upstream a3bb797 to fix unused warnings, FTBFS.
      (Closes: #632349)

gcompris (9.3-1.1) unstable; urgency=medium

  * Non-maintainer upload.
  * Drop -DG{T,D}K_DISABLE_DEPRECATED (Closes: #622033).
  * Add -lX11 to LDFLAGS (Closes: #554419).
  * Don't ship .la files (Closes: #621261).
 -- Daniel T Chen <email address hidden> Sat, 13 Aug 2011 19:30:23 -0400

Changed in gcompris (Ubuntu):
status: In Progress → Fix Released
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