Spelling and Grammar Errors in Control file
Affects | Status | Importance | Assigned to | Milestone | |
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gcompris (Ubuntu) |
Fix Released
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Undecided
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Unassigned |
Bug Description
Steps:
1. Open Ubuntu Software Center
2. Search for gcompris
3. Click the 'More Info' button
There are some spelling and grammar mistakes in the description text.
Second paragraph states "Language-oriented games now contain vocabulary for too many languages to list them heres. "
I suggest that it is changed to "Language-oriented games contain vocabulary for many different languages."
In the list of available boards in the next paragraph there is the line " . learning simple arithmetics"
This should read ". learning simple arithmetic"
The last line also has ". etc."
My opinion only, but I don't think we need that.
ProblemType: Bug
DistroRelease: Ubuntu 11.04
Package: gcompris 9.3-1ubuntu2
ProcVersionSign
Uname: Linux 2.6.38-10-generic x86_64
Architecture: amd64
Date: Fri Aug 12 12:33:29 2011
InstallationMedia: Ubuntu 11.04 "Natty Narwhal" - Release amd64 (20110427.1)
ProcEnviron:
LANGUAGE=en_US:en
LANG=en_US.UTF-8
SHELL=/bin/bash
SourcePackage: gcompris
UpgradeStatus: No upgrade log present (probably fresh install)
Related branches
- Daniel T Chen: Approve
- Ubuntu branches: Pending requested
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Diff: 40 lines (+8/-11)1 file modifieddebian/control (+8/-11)
tags: | added: patch |
Changed in gcompris (Ubuntu): | |
status: | New → In Progress |
I will try to write a patch with my suggested changes.
Thanks
Paul Stewart