Spelling and Grammar Errors in Control file

Bug #834199 reported by Paul Stewart
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Affects Status Importance Assigned to Milestone
One Hundred Papercuts
Fix Released
Low
Papercuts Ninjas
biniax2 (Debian)
Fix Released
Unknown
biniax2 (Ubuntu)
Fix Released
Low
Unassigned

Bug Description

1. Open Ubuntu Software Center and search for 'Biniax'. Biniax-2 will be displayed.
2. Click on the 'More Info' button.

In the description there are a couple of spelling errors:
"singleplayer" should be "single-player"
"multiplayer" should be "multi-player"
"gameplay" should be "game-play"

Also, the second sentence starts "Takes a minute...."
I think this should say "It only takes a minute..."
I also think that "...hall of fame,...." should be "...a hall of fame,..."

ProblemType: Bug
DistroRelease: Ubuntu 11.04
Package: biniax2 1.30-1
ProcVersionSignature: Ubuntu 2.6.38-11.48-generic 2.6.38.8
Uname: Linux 2.6.38-11-generic x86_64
Architecture: amd64
Date: Thu Aug 25 15:49:15 2011
InstallationMedia: Ubuntu 11.04 "Natty Narwhal" - Release amd64 (20110427.1)
ProcEnviron:
 LANGUAGE=en_US:en
 LANG=en_US.UTF-8
 SHELL=/bin/bash
SourcePackage: biniax2
UpgradeStatus: No upgrade log present (probably fresh install)

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Paul Stewart (paulbrianstewart) wrote :
tags: added: patch
Changed in biniax2 (Ubuntu):
importance: Undecided → Low
status: New → Incomplete
status: Incomplete → Triaged
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Ubuntu Foundations Team Bug Bot (crichton) wrote :

The attachment "Control file patch" of this bug report has been identified as being a patch. The ubuntu-reviewers team has been subscribed to the bug report so that they can review the patch. In the event that this is in fact not a patch you can resolve this situation by removing the tag 'patch' from the bug report and editing the attachment so that it is not flagged as a patch. Additionally, if you are member of the ubuntu-sponsors please also unsubscribe the team from this bug report.

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Changed in hundredpapercuts:
milestone: none → precise-8-softwarecenter-app-descriptions
assignee: nobody → Papercuts Ninja (papercuts-ninja)
importance: Undecided → Low
status: New → Triaged
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Maarten Bezemer (veger) wrote :

As suggest by Brian Murray in the merge review, I have send a upstream error report including an updated patch with the correct grammar/spelling fix (as suggest by Brian)

Changed in biniax2 (Debian):
importance: Undecided → Unknown
status: New → Unknown
Changed in biniax2 (Debian):
status: Unknown → New
tags: added: patch-forwarded-debian
Changed in hundredpapercuts:
milestone: precise-8-softwarecenter-app-descriptions → quantal-3-software-centre-app-metadata
Changed in biniax2 (Debian):
status: New → Fix Released
Changed in hundredpapercuts:
status: Triaged → Fix Released
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Launchpad Janitor (janitor) wrote :

This bug was fixed in the package biniax2 - 1.30-7

---------------
biniax2 (1.30-7) unstable; urgency=medium

  * Team upload.

  [ Debian Janitor ]
  * Mark biniax2-data as “Multi-Arch: foreign”.

  [ Stephen Kitt ]
  * Fix spelling and grammar in the package description.
    Closes: #659609, LP: #834199.
  * Remove biniax2 when cleaning so that the package can be built twice
    in a row.
  * Avoid parsing find’s output during the build.
  * Switch debian/watch to version 4 and update download URL.
  * Set “Rules-Requires-Root: no”.
  * Standards-Version 4.6.2, no further change required.

 -- Stephen Kitt <email address hidden> Sat, 21 Jan 2023 11:21:44 +0100

Changed in biniax2 (Ubuntu):
status: Triaged → Fix Released
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